Okay, this is so bad that it made me laugh. I have to share it.
This is why we proof-read, people. So we don't get garbage like this phrase I found in my first draft.
"Something wrapped around her shoulders. Sol had come and wrapped an arm around her shoulders."
(I guess I paused between these two sentences? Come back after dinner or something? That would make more sense, at least XD)
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