Ok, so I've made a couple changes to Shadow Split. Remember I said that Jeromi is from Australia? And I said Eliandra is from Mexico/South America. But Australians have a really good sense of humor and stuff like that. And Jeromi is kind of a jerk. It's Eli who has the sense of humor. So she clearly needs to be from AUstralia. I'm not saying that people from South America are jerks! Jeromi isn't that bad after a while. I just thought Eli seemed more like an Australian.
Oh, and Terra. She's from Africa. But Terra is clearly not an african name! Even though I'm almost at the climax of the story, I'm going to try to find a better name for her. A name that sounds a little more african.
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