I think the first chapter of Evva's story is in good shape (it's a prologue, really). But the next chapter has always been annoying. I think I have it good, then I look at it again and it still feels flimsy.
I just redid it once more, adding more detail. I think it will help with the pacing, give more of Evva's character, and provide a stronger link to the prologue.
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